One change I did make according to my most latest feedback on my newspaper from my teachers was to the Bristol Zoo plug on my front cover.
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Here is my Bristol Zoo plug before and after the changes. One major change that needed to me made to this Bristol Zoo plug was the logo that was used in the first place. To begin with I uses the original Bristol Zoo logo until my teachers reminded me that I was not allowed to do that, instead I used the software Pixlemator to make my own Bristol Zoo logo and included it on my newspaper plug.
I also included an image of a butterfly to this plug making it more pleasing on the eye attracting more attention.
Another small change I made on the inside page of my newspaper was to the red bar above the fold containing the date, the page number and the newspapers web address.
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Its hard to notice in these images but the small change I made to this red information bar was was by putting the page number on the inside pages in the top right hand corner instead of in the middle of the bar where it was originally. I chose to make this small change as it makes it easier and more effective for my audience to find a certain page they may be looking for.
Another small change made to my newspaper was the layout of the lines separating up the page. Originally I did have lines in between each column of the stories, also between the image and the story and finally also between the heading of the story and the story itself. Instead I now have lines only separating the two different stories on the page and also separating my adverts from the stories. The reason I decided to remove the majority of lines on the page is because I thought it confused the page a little having lines everywhere not making it clear what images heading and stories went together.
